Dying Fetus — Grotesque Impalement 4 String bass tabs

Alright this is my first tab ever and im tired 
First off i converted this song from a 5 string tab by [email protected] 
i just converted it to the octives so here we go

Grotesque Impalement— By Dying Fetus
4 string Normal Tunning

E
A  565 565 565
D 7   7   7   888999
G 


E
A 555555555  555555
D
G          88      77778888


E
A
D
G 7777888877776666777788887777

E
A 986~ 985~ 8p 9p 8p 9p
D
G

E
A 6666666666 99 88 555555555 99 88 8p 9p 8p 9p
D
G

E
A 8888 9 6666 8 5~ 8888 9 6666 8 5p
D
G

E
A 2 4 5 878 7p 7p 7p 7p 8p 8p 8p 8p
D
G

E
A 8h7 8h7 555555 8h7 8h7
D                       7 6 666666
G

E
A 8h7 55 8h7 55 8 9 8 55 8h7 55 8h7 4 333333
D
G

E
A 555555555  555555        5~
D
G          88      77778888

E
A 5  87 76 55     88777  77 66 5~
D  87  7     88 77     77
G

E
A 986~ 985~ 8p9p8p9p8p9p8p9p
D
G

E
A 6666666666 99 88 55555555 99 88 8p9p8p9p
D
G

E
A 888 9 6666 8 5~ 888 9 6666 8 5~
D
G

E
A 5~ 5  5h7 5h8 5h7 5h8 5
D     7~
G

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