Thrice — Hideous Strength bass tabs

This is way off.  I tabbed it out in my first week of playing bass.  I'm going to figure out 
the right way and retab it.  It should be done by Monday the 5th of January.
        
  Verse     Chorus
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  Less Hard Part
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B:——————————————3

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